My Best Friend
I have best friend. His name is Efan. He studies at a Junior High School 2 Jombang. Same with me.
Now he is in the 8th grade. He is 13 years old. He lives in Weru
Efan is tall and thin. His face is round. He has short and curly black hair. His nose is flat. His skin is brown. He has brown eyes.
Efan is a good boy. He usually helps his mother to market in Sunday. His smart in Social subject. His hobby is playing game online and football
Please comment
ReplyDeleteIt's a good text, but you should edit some parts of it:
ReplyDelete1. I have best friend: I have a best friend
2. He studies at a Junior High School 2 Jombang. Same with me = He studies at Junior High School 2 Jombang, like me.
3. His smart in Social subject = He is smart in social science.
4. His hobby is playing game online and football= His hobbies are playing on line games
and playing football.
good job bro!
ReplyDelete:)
good text..
ReplyDeletei like it !!